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Reflection of Feedback

Response and Revisions

Introduction

Feedback provided by the ISDT doctoral dossier committee, combined with insights gained through the dossier observation process, prompted a meaningful shift in how I understand and present my doctoral work. While the committee affirmed that my dossier demonstrates strong evidence of professional competency across scholarship, learning design, and service, their comments consistently emphasized the need for clearer articulation of developmental trajectory, scholarly self-awareness, and integration across domains. Rather than requesting additional artifacts, the feedback highlighted the importance of strengthening the narrative layer of the dossier so that it more explicitly communicates how my competencies have evolved and where they continue to grow. Reviewing prior successful dossiers reinforced this message. Stronger dossiers did not merely document accomplishments, they presented a coherent professional identity supported by reflective synthesis, evidence of impact, and explicit acknowledgment of competencies still in progress. This process helped me reframe my dossier from a retrospective collection of work to a curated professional argument demonstrating ongoing development as a scholar-practitioner.

The dossier observation report, revision plan, revision log, and reflection below reflects this shift in perspective. Across the identified sections, revisions focus on three key themes:

  1. Naming specific competencies still developing across scholarship, learning design, and service
  2. Explaining why these areas are important to my focus and long-term professional trajectory
  3. Identifying concrete strategies for continued growth.

These changes aim to make visible the intellectual humility, reflective practice, and intentional professional development expected at the doctoral level. Collectively, these revisions strengthen the dossier’s through-line as an integrated, evolving profile of a scholar-practitioner whose committed to demonstrating competence, and pursuing continued growth and contribution within the field.

Dossier Observation Report

The first step in preparing the final dossier consisted of completing observations of prior doctoral dossiers to enhance my understanding of expectations. This reflection synthesizes insights gained from reviewing five completed dossiers and examines patterns that distinguish stronger presentations of scholar-practitioner identity. Performing this analysis informed how I interpreted committee feedback about my draft dossier and shaped the revision plan below. Strengthening narrative synthesis, articulating competencies in progress, and clarifying the integration of scholarship, learning design, and service emerged as themes of interest.

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Feedback Received & Revision Plan

Dossier Section Subsection Feedback Received Reflection on Feedback Revision Plan
Candidate Statement
Candidate Statement Goals Requrement Met N/A N/A
Candidate Statement Focus Area Requirement Met N/A N/A
Candidate Statement Knowledge & Expertise The statement demonstrates (1) a strong grasp of major ideas and theories in ISDT, (2) integration of knowledge from multiple areas, and (3) practical applicability to the field. A brief acknowledgment of future areas for growth would further enhance the balance and reflective quality expected at the doctoral level. Reviewing committee feedback and exemplar dossiers deepened my understanding of the Knowledge & Expertise section. Presenting current knowledge and its evolution at the doctoral level is crucial. Stronger dossiers showed that candidates who identify strengths and outline development plans enhance, not diminish, professional credibility. This revision will position me as an emerging scholar-practitioner with a clear path to deepening my theoretical foundation and expanding my competencies.
  • Incorporate developmental aspirations in each of the three knowledge areas, intentionally spanning:
    • Scholarship (e.g., deeper theoretical synthesis or research methodology)
    • Learning Design (e.g., accessibility, advanced assessment, or large-scale evaluation)
    • Professional/Service Leadership (e.g., mentoring, field contribution, or organizational leadership)
  • For each area, briefly explain why it matters to my focus and long-term trajectory.
  • Include specific strategies for growth.
  • Frame developmental content added as next-stage doctoral development, reinforcing a growth trajectory.
  • Add a closing sentence that connects this evolving expertise to how I will continue integrating scholarship, learning design, and service in my professional identity.
Evidence of Scholarship
Scholarship Introduction This introduction aligns with the field, presents a clear philosophy, and identifies broad competencies. It partially demonstrates evidence of acquired competencies but lacks specific reference to dossier evidence and omits acknowledgment of competencies still in progress. Through feedback and other dossier observations I've clarified that a doctoral-level scholarship introduction must function as a roadmap, not just a philosophy statement. While my draft conveyed my values and orientation toward scholarly inquiry, it did not anchor those ideas in evidence presented or acknowledge competencies still developing. Strengthening this section allows me to demonstrate scholarly self-awareness by naming both demonstrated research capabilities and areas where my scholarship is still evolving.
  • Add explicit references to key scholarship evidence to demonstrate specific competencies developed (e.g., literature synthesis and research design).
  • Include a short section identifying scholarly competencies under development (e.g., deeper theoretical integration, broader peer-review engagement, and methodological rigor).
  • Explain why these developmental areas are important to my evolving research identity.
  • Describe how I plan to strengthen these areas through continued research, collaboration, and scholarly engagement.
  • Strengthen transitions that position scholarship as interconnected with learning design and service, not a standalone competency.
  • Ensure the tone reflects scholar development, emphasizing trajectory and reflective growth rather than completion.
Scholarship Literature Reviews To strengthen the SAM vs. Dick & Carey evidence as a literature review, the analysis could move further beyond description toward clearer synthesis across sources, highlighting where authors align, diverge, and what themes emerge. Adding a small number of peer-reviewed studies in place of practitioner sources would increase rigor, and a brief connection to broader conversations in the field (such as design thinking or human-centered design) would help situate the comparison within current discourse. These refinements are not required for the final dossier; instead, they can be acknowledged in the artifact introduction. In that introduction, you can note where improvements could be made and explain how making those refinements would support continued development of scholarship competencies, such as strengthening critical synthesis, deepening engagement with peer-reviewed research, and connecting individual analyses to broader disciplinary conversations. The dossier observations and committee feedback helped me recognize that earlier scholarly work should be framed as evidence of developmental progression rather than presented as a polished endpoint. This literature review represents an early stage in my doctoral scholarship, when my synthesis skills and engagement with peer-reviewed research were still emerging. Revising the artifact description allows me to model scholarly self-assessment by acknowledging the review’s limitations while demonstrating how my approach to research synthesis has since become more rigorous and theoretically grounded.
  • Clarify this literature review was developed early in my doctoral studies, positioning it as evidence of emerging scholarship.
  • Acknowledge specific limitations in the review (e.g., more descriptive than synthetic, limited peer-reviewed sources, narrow connection to broader conversation).
  • Briefly explain how my literature synthesis skills have evolved since completing this work.
  • Reference later scholarship evidence that demonstrates stronger synthesis, theoretical grounding, or research integration.
  • Frame the artifact as part of a developmental trajectory in scholarly competence, rather than as a standalone demonstration of mastery.
Scholarship Research Paper This manuscript demonstrates clear growth in quantitative inquiry through its structured research question, appropriate methods, and clear reporting. You do not need to revise the paper for the dossier; however, your narrative can briefly acknowledge that incorporating a stronger literature base and deeper discussion of methodological limitations would further strengthen your competencies in research design, analytic reasoning, and scholarly positioning. Describing how these enhancements would support your continued development will be sufficient. The committee’s feedback helped me see that demonstrating research competence at the doctoral level involves not only executing a study, but critically evaluating its design, theoretical grounding, and limitations. While this manuscript reflects meaningful growth in quantitative inquiry and analytic reasoning, I now recognize the importance of articulating where the study could be strengthened and how those insights inform my ongoing development as a researcher. Revising the artifact description allows me to present this work as part of an evolving research trajectory rather than as a finished scholarly endpoint.
  • Add a brief acknowledgment of methodological limitations (e.g., scope, sampling, measurement, or analytic constraints).
  • Note limitations in the literature base or theoretical framing that could be strengthened in future work.
  • Explain how addressing these limitations would enhance the rigor and contribution of future research.
  • Position the study as evidence of developing competence in research design and analysis, not final mastery.
  • Connect this growth to my long-term scholarly goals and continued development in research methodology and theoretical integration
Scholarship Presentation Requirement Met TBD TBD
Scholarship Supplementary Requirement Met TBD TBD
Evidence of Learning Design
Learning Design Introduction The introduction would benefit from more explicit discussion of competencies still needing development and a clear plan to address them. At present, it emphasizes strengths and philosophy but does not identify gaps such as accessibility standards, large-scale program evaluation, or assessment design. Adding specific strategies such as targeted professional development, collaboration with field experts, or applying research to practice would demonstrate a concrete growth plan. Linking artifacts more directly to the competencies they represent and grounding the philosophy in current design research would further strengthen the clarity and depth of the introduction. Feedback and dossier observations clarified that strong doctoral learning design sections do more than describe philosophy and successful projects, they also acknowledge competencies that are still developing. While my draft emphasized strengths in applied design and implementation, it did not clearly identify areas such as accessibility, large-scale evaluation, or assessment design as next-stage growth. Revising this section allows me to frame my learning design expertise as part of an evolving professional trajectory grounded in reflective practice and continued skill expansion.
  • Add a focused paragraph identifying 2–3 learning design competencies still developing (e.g., accessibility standards, program evaluation, assessment design).
  • Briefly explain why these competencies are important for my focus and future professional impact.
  • Describe specific strategies for growth (professional development, collaboration with specialists, applying research to practice, etc...).
  • Frame these areas as next-stage development for a design scholar-practitioner.
  • Strengthen language that positions learning design work as interconnected with scholarship and service, reinforcing an integrated professional identity.
Learning Design Instructional Plan & Training Materials Requirement Met N/A N/A
Learning Design Evaluations Requirement Met N/A N/A
Learning Design Supplementary Requirement Met N/A N/A
Evidence of Service
Service Introduction The introduction gives a strong general perspective but would benefit from greater detail. It should identify specific competencies developed through service, such as leadership, mentoring, or contributions to professional organizations, and connect these to examples of impact. It would also be strengthened by addressing areas that still need development and outlining a plan for growth. Finally, linking service activities more clearly to long-term career goals and focus areas would help demonstrate intentional and sustained engagement. Dossier observations and feedback highlighted that doctoral-level service should demonstrate professional growth, leadership development, and meaningful contribution to the field. While my draft communicated commitment and involvement, it did not clearly articulate the competencies I have developed through service or how those experiences align with my long-term professional identity. Revising this section allows me to frame service as an intentional component of my scholar-practitioner trajectory and to identify areas where my professional leadership is still evolving.
  • Identify specific competencies developed through service (e.g., leadership, collaboration, mentoring, organizational systems awareness).
  • Provide brief examples of impact or contribution.
  • Clarify how service activities align with and support my focus area and career trajectory.
  • Add one area of professional/service growth still developing (e.g., leadership in professional organizations, broader field dissemination, or expanded mentoring roles)
  • Describe concrete strategies for expanding my service impact and leadership moving forward.
  • Reinforce how service integrates with scholarship and learning design, supporting a cohesive professional identity.
Service Documentation Requirement Met N/A N/A
Service Supplementary Requirement Met N/A N/A
General Organization & Presentation
Dossier Organization & Presentation Professionally presented, with consistent formatting, clear headings, and a polished layout that enhances readability. For the final submission, ensure that all embedded artifacts are visible and accessible to viewers. The dossier observation reflection reified confidence in my dossier’s visual organization and navigational clarity. When other dossier presentations lacked contextual structure and connective affordances it was difficult to interpret evidence. It’s clear that strong presentational elements are a meaningful performance support for integration, reader comprehension, and access.
  • Review and ensure that all embedded evidence are visible and accessible to view.
  • Uphold consistent formatting, clear headings, and polished layout when making changes and edits to the dossier.

Dossier Revision Log

Dossier Section Subsection Revisions Made
Candidate Statement
Candidate Statement Knowledge & Expertise The knowledge & expertise section now showcases a stronger grasp of major ideas and theories, integration of knowledge from multiple areas, and practical applicability to the field. It also addresses future areas for growth in emerging tech, learning design, and workforce/organizational systems, providing a clear and forward-looking plan for continued doctoral development.

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Evidence of Scholarship
Scholarship Introduction The scholarship introduction reflects feedback and revision plans by articulating the research agenda, adding explicit references to evidence, identifying competencies under development, and explaining the importance of growth in scholarship.

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Scholarship Literature Reviews The SAM vs. Dick and Carey literature review description has been expanded to clarify the artifact's timeline within doctoral studies, acknowledge the limitations of synthesis, and explain the evolution of scholarship skills across other dossier evidence.

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Scholarship Research Paper The revised research paper description highlights growth in research design and analysis, while acknowledging limitations in methodology and grounding in peer-reviewed literature. Future revisions to the study were noted as focusing on stronger theoretical grounding, improved sampling, and more rigorous research.

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Evidence of Learning Design
Learning Design Introduction The learning design introduction was revised to address feedback by identifying developing competencies and outlining growth strategies. I revised the design philosophy to include a stronger focus on research-informed frameworks.

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Evidence of Service
Service Introduction The service introduction now addresses areas in the introduction needing more detail and development. My revision plan was met, with evidence of competency identification, impact examples, alignment with focus and trajectory, and integration of service with scholarship and design.

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Reflective Response & Next Steps

Engaging in this reflective response process transformed how I understand my doctoral dossier and my development as a scholar-practitioner. Committee feedback and insights gained through observing prior dossiers prompted me to shift from simply documenting accomplishments toward articulating a coherent narrative of growth across scholarship, learning design, and service. This process required naming competencies still in development, explaining their relevance to my long-term professional trajectory, and identifying concrete strategies for continued growth. As I move forward, my next steps include deepening my theoretical grounding in research and evaluation, expanding my expertise in large-scale and data-informed assessment practices, and taking on more active leadership roles within professional communities. These directions reflect my commitment to sustained, intentional development and to contributing meaningfully to the evolving field of instructional systems design and technology.

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